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Briefing 09 of 10 · Principle 9

Make It Easy to Read (Or They Won't)

Walls of text get skipped.

ABOUT 2 MIN READ2 INTERCEPTED REWRITES1 FIELD MISSION

Here's something nobody tells you: people don't actually read your copy. They scan it. They skim it, looking for reasons to dive deeper or to leave.

So if your copy looks like a wall of text? They leave. Every time.

How to structure copy for actual humans

Use short sentences.

Like this.

See how easy that was to read?

Then use a longer sentence to add some depth and context, giving more information while keeping a natural flow that doesn't feel overwhelming.

Then back to short and punchy.

  • Vary your paragraph length. One-sentence paragraphs grab attention. Paragraphs of two to four sentences do the explaining. They're the workhorses of good copy.
  • Use white space. It gives the eye somewhere to rest. Dense blocks of text are intimidating; spaced-out copy is inviting.
  • Use subheadings. Drop one in every 200 to 300 words. They help scanners find what they're looking for and give readers a break.
  • Bold the good stuff, sparingly. Key phrases, important figures, major benefits. If everything is bold, nothing stands out.

Think of your copy like a motorway. You want clear lanes, obvious exits, and signs telling people where they're going.

A scannable structure

  • What it does: Manages your whole sales pipeline in one place
  • How it helps you: Close more deals by never missing a follow-up
  • What customers say: "I went from losing track of leads to closing £100k in new business." Sarah, founder
  • What it costs: £49 a month, cancel anytime

See how your eye lands on the bold labels? That's the point.

— Intercepted copy

Before and after

INTERCEPTED

Our comprehensive solution offers integrated functionality across multiple platforms with seamless synchronisation capabilities that enable users to maximise productivity through streamlined workflows and optimised resource allocation while maintaining enterprise-grade security protocols.

REWRITE

Work on your laptop at the office. Pick up where you left off on your phone at lunch. Finish on your tablet at home. Everything syncs automatically. Your data stays secure. Simple as that.

INTERCEPTED

Utilise our innovative productivity suite to facilitate cross-functional collaboration.

REWRITE

Work together. From anywhere.

QUICK TEST

Squint at your copy. Can you see varied paragraph lengths, clear visual breaks and inviting white space?

— Briefing 09

Field mission

Take the longest paragraph in your copy and break it into three shorter ones under a subheading.

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